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A dark cloaked figure walked up the ramp and into the waiting ship. She walked past an assortment of guards who steered clear of her. She walked into the control room, where she was met by a robotic creature.

“Ahh, you have arrived.”

“Yes General Grevous. You know the plan right?”

A raspy laugh came from Grevous. “Of course! I can’t wait to kill those Jedi scum!”

The teen waved a finger. “Ah ah ah. Just the masters. We shall keep the Padawans and any of their allies that seem promising enough.”

Grevous huffed in annoyance. “As you command, Darth Rouge.”

~*~

Count Dooku approached the hologram base quietly. He hated talking to his master. The hologram switched on as he bowed. A cloaked figure stood there.

“How is the training coming along?” a voice hissed.

“She is doing well Master Sidious.”

“Are you having any troubles?”

“No, she is learning quickly. Soon, she will be ready to help with the attack.”

The figure smiled evilly. “Good, good. We shall soon see the power of Darth Rouge!”

~*~

“Masters, Masters! The new Padawans are here!” A 15 year old girl said breathlessly. She was followed by five more teens.

“Very good Atinly. Bring them in.” commanded Mace Windu.

The two walked in and motion the four behind them to go in first. Andromidea closed the doors behind them.

The four girls looked around nervously. One had light blue skin and dark blue hair, while another had tan skin and was a cyborg. Another had dark green hair and purple eyes and the last was a pale girl with tanish brown hair.

Master Yoda got up and stood in front of them. “Welcome younglings, you are greeted warmly by all.”

The girls all bowed back.

Yoda turned to the masters. “You may accept your Padawans now.”

Obi-Wan stood up. “I will be taking Natell as my Padawan.”

The alien girl with light blue skin stepped forward, her ponytail bouncing. She smiled up at him.

“Natell Colowren, at your service!”

Obi-Wan smiled back. As he led her from the room, she gave a low profile high-five to Nalani. He looked at her and she smiled innocently at him. This one would take some work, just like his old Padawan.

Izula walked up to them, her black, blue and green hair flowing behind her. She stopped in front on them.

“I’ll be taking Riha on as my Padawan.”

The pale girl stepped forward. “I’m Riha.”

Izula smiled and led her out the door. She looked at her new Padawan. She looked like… No, they didn’t exist anymore. Did they?

Revanue got up and looked at the last two. “I’ll be taking you both as my Padawans, considering no one else will. Let’s go.”

As they left the room, Revanue used the force to see how her Padawans felt. Nalani was almost unreadable, but there was a sense of annoyance and frustration around her. Getsuei was nervous and happy at the same time.

‘Great,’ she thought, ‘I have opposites.’

~*~

“No youngling, you must focus.”

“I am! And I’m 15!”

Obi-Wan looked at her. “Fine. Padawan. Now, concentrate.”

Natell sighed raising her hand. She closed her eyes and focused. She moved her hand slightly.

She opened her eyes. She had moved the canister!

“I GOT IT!” she squealed, dancing around Obi-Wan. “I USED THE FORCE!”

Obi-Wan smiled and shook his head. “Control yourself youngling.”

Natell stopped dancing. “Right, sorry. And it’s Padawan!”

Obi-Wan looked her up and down at his Padawan. Dark blue hair, light blue skin, dark blue shirt and skirt, the white belt ready for a lightsaber, and the dark blue and white knee-high boots. (They look like Wonder Woman’s!)

He smiled a small smile. “Yes, I suppose it is now.”

~*~

Riha angled her yellow lightsaber, then twirled it expertly. “Like that?”

Izula nodded. “Yes, yes, that’s wonderful!”

Riha smiled widely and punched her fist in the air. “Yeah!”

Izula rose her eyebrows at her. Riha looked confused.

“What?”

Izula waved her hand dismissively. “Oh nothing, nothing.”

~*~

“I can’t do it!”

“Yes you can! Concentrate!”

“I can’t, I can’t, I can’t!”

Revanue pinched her forehead. “Nalani, just relax and concentrate.”

“I CAN’T!” snapped Nalani.

Revanue bit her lip to keep from saying anything.

Getsuei giggled at her fellow Padawan.

Nalani spun to face her. “Shut up.”

Getsuei quickly turned away, smiling to herself. “Wait till I tell the others she can’t meditate.”

~*~

Andromidea sighed as she watched the Padawans train.

“You feel left out?”

The fox-eared teen turned to see clone Commander Rex. She shrugged, her ears drooping.

“I dunno.”

Rex bent down to her eye level. “I thought you’ve always wanted to be a Padawan?”

Andromidea’s ears perked up. “But how…?”

Rex smiled. “Atinly told me. She thinks your better at being an ally. I sure do.”

The teen blushed. “Ya think?”

“Yes. You were meant to weild a blaster. Although, being a Jedi would be pretty cool.” He winked at her.

“You know it!”

~*~

Atinly watched Obi-Wan and Natell training. She watched Obi-Wan intently. He looked back and saw her, giving her a small wave. She waved back wildly and Obi-Wan sighed.

‘That was odd.’ He thought.
YAY! I FINALLY GO IT DONE!!! 8D;;;

Anyways, I hope you all think this is okay. It took me forevvveeer. So please comment and fave!

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Nalani~ :iconshadowdemon101:

Revanue~ :iconlepahybrid:

Getsuei~ :iconusa-wolfdog:

Izula~ :iconshot2theheart:

Riha~ :iconflareblade2000:


Natell~ Mine! 8D

Andromidea~ :iconjewelsparrow:

Atinly~ :iconkirlialover:

Rodin (Darth Rouge)~ :iconautogirl:

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ZapAmokney's avatar
wow this was awesome! i wish i could rp with you sometime, i have a starwars OC called Arial. he haz black hair and Purple eyes!

Arial: *really really shy*